Dee: This visit was horrible!
Hakeem-A-Barber: I agree this was the first and last time I am going over to your mothers
house.
Dee:(with anger) You were one of the main reasons why the visit went like that!
Hakeem-A-Barber:(with confusion on his face) Wait, What did I do?
Dee:You know exactly what I am talking about! What was wrong with my mamas food?
Hakeem-A-Barber:You know I dont eat pork!
Dee: Well all of it wasn't pork you just wanted to make a big scene like always. You can never just be greatful.
Hakeem-A-Barber:So are you blaming it all on me?
Dee: No, no I am not its Maggies fault too. Why did she get to get the quilt? Why does mama treat her like that?
Hakeem-A-Barber:(calm but serious voice)Maybe your being a little extreme don't you think? How do you think Maggie feels? You are the one that got sent away to get a real education, you were the one who has the nice style and maybe she thinks you get whatever you want.
Dee: (speechless staring in space with her thinking face on) Well I never thought of it like that.
CYDNEY, BESTFRIEND! Lol I like it, you just missed a couple apostrophes. Other than that it's good! =)
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