"Mama! Why does Maggie get the quilts shes a no good brat or has never done anything in her life!" Says Dee with frustration
"Maggie gets to have the quilts first because she asked for them and second because you are practically spoiled you get everything you want. What makes you think you deserve them more than your sister?" says Mama
"Mama, please if there was one thing that you could ever give me let it be these quilts." Said Dee with a hint of sadness
"I'm sorry, but Maggie will be getting these quilts because I promised her I would give them to her for her wedding." Says Mama
"Fine, I hope I never see you or Maggie ever again." says Dee while she storms out of the house
Sonny, overall I think your plot was good but you should expand your story a little next time. Maybe elaborate into more of Dee's feelings.
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