Dear Ruby,
I am truly sorry to hear about the loss of your mother. Losing someone is always hard but especially someone as close to you as your mother. I understand you are grieving along with father and sister. Everyone grieves in their own way and your sister is a prime example of that. I understand that she is rebelling against your father and your eyes it probably looks likes she changing into a completely different person. You need to let your sister know that you are there for her and you want to help. Ask her if she needs someone to talk to. Your sister needs you right now. As for your father you need to explain to him how you feel and that you are hurt by his actions and that he is your father and you need him. I am hurt by the fact that a young lady such as yourself is going through what you are going through but life goes on, and days get brighter. I hope you take my advice into consideration and that you and your family benefit from it.
Good job Amber. It looks like there is one word missing ("in") in the fifth sentence, but otherwise, nice proofreading. I will have a grade for you tomorrow!
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