Dear Ms. Cathy,
I'm very sorry to hear of your lost. But I am happy to hear that you are handling the lost in a mature manner. Everyone handles loss in different ways. Your sister is simply grieving. Your sister may have the idea in her mind, that your father is a cause for your mother’s passing. Many people have this mindset after such a tragic event. If she is thinking this way, she may be trying to deceive your father so that he can feel the grief and pain she feels and shows everyday for your mother. Your father is also grieving, he may just have a harder time showing it in a positive manner. When he uses his temper, maybe he is simply encouraging you and your sister to do what he feels is right, so he won’t have to suffer another disappointment or loss. All you can really do is continue doing what’s right. Perhaps you can talk to your father and sister to help them understand each other better. Good Luck!
Great job Lauryn! I liked the fact that this was short and sweet. There were a few grammatical errors here and there, but other than that, it was great!
ReplyDeleteHey Lauryn, this is good, but try not to start to many sentences with the same word or it can seem a bit redundant, but other than that and the grammatical errors Brooke mentioned, this is good!
ReplyDeleteGood work... a little proofreading would have poslished this nicely. I will have a grade for you tomorrow!
ReplyDeleteThis was good, but it did bother me that you kept saying "your'lost'". Its actually "your 'loss'" lol. But, it was really good. Short and sweet but still sounding adult-like. I could really see it in an advice colom in a magazine! Good job, Sue ;)
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