Dear Ms. Ruby Cathy,
I am really sorry to hear about your mothers passing. It is not easy to be in a situation were your mother has just passed away and your being treated like that by your father. I dont like the fact that he uses the belt on you what so ever, that is just a wrong doing by a parent. He should be very supportive of you and your sister when you guys are struggling the most. Now for your sister she should not lie to your father no matter how he treats her or not because no matter what he is still your father. She is very Greiving!, She thinks that your father caused your mothers death when she is wrong. Now all you have to do to help keep your family together is be yourself and try working with both of them. Its gonna be tough but i believe that you are strong enough to pull it off. Just try and remind them of how good life was in the past and keep bringing up good memories to bring the three of you all closer together! In the meantime i wish you the best of luck Ruby! Take care....!
i like your advice! just a little mess up on a couple of words but other then that you did a good job.
ReplyDelete^^^Agree but i think this is good for the most part your advice is very nice. good job dyll :)
ReplyDeleteDid Phyllisia think that Calvin cause her mother's death? Not bad, Dylan... but this could used plenty of proofreading. I will have a grade for you tomorrow!
ReplyDeleteI like your advice...but you need spell check!
ReplyDeleteGood advice column, but there are some spelling errors. Spell check next time!
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