I am so sorry to hear about the trouble that you are having at home. I can tell that you are in a very difficult position with your family. Something that could help bring you and your family closer is sitting them both down and talking to them about the situation. Sometimes talking about what is happening can bring out emotions and feelings in the people you are talking to. They may realize that the way the both of them are acting is foolish and unnecessary. Remind them that you are all suffering from your mother's death and you cannot take out your depression and anger on each other. A mother would never want that from her family. In order to do this though, you must not hold back and speak without fear. You cannot be afraid to tell them the truth. Ruby, I believe that you are able to help your father and sister. Good luck.
Sincerely,
Hollis
Good Job! This really sounds like an actual advice column from a newspaper. You did a great job of using different vocabulary and I can't really think of anything bad to say.
ReplyDeleteI agree with Jacob... and constructive criticism isn't "bad"... it's CONSTRUCTIVE!
ReplyDeleteOverall, nicely done Hollis. I will have a grade for you tomorrow!