Monday, November 21, 2011
Advice to Ruby Cathy by Sydnee Turner
First Ruby I send you my regards and I am so sorry to see things in your family are taking a turn for the worse. I believe all these events transpired because of the loss of a female figure in all of your lives. With her gone there was a lack of sensitivity and a hole in all of your hearts. Your sister is rebelling because she believes the world is unfair and imbalanced. She wants to do what is right, but she is too reckless to see she is only making matters worse. Your father does not know how to deal with his excess emotions and is resorting to violence to appease his temper. I suggest sitting down with your family, hopefully they are reasonable, and talk to them about what is concerning you,
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Nicely stated! I appreciate your use of vocabulary as well... you are never afraid to say things, Sydnee, and I like that. Despite the typos and format issues (no greeting or salutation?), well done. I will have a grade for you tomorrow.
ReplyDeleteDear Sydnee,
ReplyDeleteI strongly enjoyed your figurative language,
It was short but your words were suited well. Perhaps you could of put more advice on how to resolve the problem. But other than it being it slightly short and cutting off when I personally feel like there should be at least on more sentence. Overall it was a pleasure to read.(: