Dear Ruby,
I'm so sorry to hear about the loss of your mother. I know it's hard to lose someone so close to you. It must be hard to deal with the loss of your mother. You and your sister must be grieving terribly. That must be the reason why she is misbehaving and disrespecting your father. For her, acting out is another way for her to express her feelings. Everyone grieves differently. Talk to her and ask her what's going on. You both need each other, especially during this tragic time. Be there for each other and I'm sure both of you will be good as new! Just remember, family is important and they'll always be there for you no matter what.
You did a good job.
ReplyDeleteShort and sweet... and you proofread very well. I will have a grade for you tomorrow!
ReplyDeleteI like your advice because I believe that it would give Ruby hope to keep helping her family and making things better.
ReplyDeleteSierra this is excellent. You really make the reader believe and trust you. You are great at proofreading because i found no mistakes.
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